ramsaii

Not my best piece, but I already had this one (at least mostly) ready to post.  Thanks for all comments and suggestions.


Verse 1:

I'm just sittin' here
Writing you this letter
To remind you of the things
We've done together
I wouldn't trade them in
For anything but you.

You've gave me so many memories
All the places we've gone
And the people we've seen
It means so much to me
Just to know that they
Were with you.

Chorus:

So I tip my hat to you
For giving my life such meaning
And I pray our loves not through
This way

When I think of you I get chills
When I see your smiling face,
It just seems like a thousand years
But it was only yesterday.

Verse 2:

I'm just sittin' here
Writing you this letter
I woke up today.
But didn't feel any better
I looked by my side
And could've sworn that I'd
Saw you.

I guess I just let my thoughts
Get the best of me,
Dreaming of me and you,
Next to Tennessee,
Or a walk on the beach
In a town that I once knew.

[Chorus]

Bridge:

I've done you wrong,
You know it's true
You just don't know what you have
Until you lose it

But you'll be in my heart
And you'll be on my mind
And I'll never let you go.

[Chorus]

This is just a simple verse and a chorus.  Just me playing acoustic and singing.  The singing, not so good, the guitar playing not so good either =)  I was just wondering about the quality of the composition really.  For my singing I used a little bit of an auto tune program around the rough edges, so please don't judge me for that   Anyway, thanks in advance for the comments!

I'd live for you
I'd die for you
Give everything inside for
You and I
Could be
The only ones who know

I'm there for you
I'm here for you
I'm anywhere you need me to be
Anytime you want me
There with you

Chorus:

Don't you worry
About the future or the past
All that matters
Are the times we've made the best with what we do

When we're together
I'll make sure to carry through
Cause nothing really matters
Without you


Edit:  If you don't care let me know what genre this would really fit into, I'm kind of stumped on that one.  Thanks